Snyder 0 Posted August 3, 2017 (edited) Steam Name: Snyder Steam ID: STEAM_0:1:41076373 Steam Profile Link: http://steamcommunity.com/id/CaptainSnyder/ Rp Experience: Over 6+ Years How did you stumble upon our server?: At 3 AM in the god damn morning. Character Name: Coraline Norman Character Sex: female Character Age: Underaged, find out ICly. Occupation (Current or Before): Character Equipment: Glock-17, ammunition, Brick of marijuana, various pot-related items. Moral Alignment(See Chart below this post): Chaotic Good Strengths: Not many. Weaknesses: Young, naive, ridiculously sassy, thief. Character Backstory a.ka. how or why are you here (One paragraph minimum, be creative! More backstory does not always mean a better app! Put thought into how they'll interact with others too!): Private backstory, will send to owner. This character is a child character, yes. But she plays more like an adult, and due to the circumstances, and the things she's seen as a result of the apocalypse, she has matured quite a bit. However, she still has many unresolved issues regarding the fate of her friends and family, becoming a very sassy character, without any other way to vent. Edited August 4, 2017 by Guest Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
HereticsEnd 2 Posted August 3, 2017 Please fill out the missing areas. Putting "don't worry about it" almost guarantees you a denial of the app. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
HyaneFleischer 1 Posted August 3, 2017 -Support I will worry about it, this information is REQUIRED, not optional Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Snyder 0 Posted August 4, 2017 I was told I was allowed to make that part private. So I am. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
HereticsEnd 2 Posted August 4, 2017 By who? I'm pretty sure it's not allowed anymore. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Legion 5 Posted August 4, 2017 -Support I will worry about it, this information is REQUIRED, not optional As it reads on the forums, Uncle Legions character application format is completely optional. That being said things such as character equipment and stuff should be listed. And personally I'm not a fan of the hidden backstory. Also I think we're hitting the limit on child characters. (Which are required to have some sort of guardian character by default.) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Snyder 0 Posted August 4, 2017 http://zerohourrp.com/viewtopic.php?f=39&t=403&p=2062#p2062 I posted this, journal logs & character relations should give a hint as to backstory without downright ruining it. It's supposed to be something discovered ICly, so. As for equipment, yeah sure I'll add that shortly. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nyanch 0 Posted August 4, 2017 + I am... on the fence about supporting this, in honesty. However, I have roleplayed with them last night, and they were pretty good. They have learned some useful skills along the line of their seasoned roleplaying, like being a MedRP nut for example, which only helps when it comes to adding details. So, in short, their experience, if you roleplayed in them, leads me to believe that they would be able to use their character to invoke some interesting role-play. The only thing I'm iffy with is: (personally) asking for a gun and a child character in the same appThere wasn't really much 'negative' emotion with this character. I'm talking, fear, nervousness, etc.. Indeed, they are depressed, but that's whatever, I guess.I only roleplayed with them at 3 AM, while playing Overwatch and RPing at the same time. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Snyder 0 Posted August 4, 2017 My character genuinely believed that yours was bluffing. She knows that people generally don't shoot kiddo's, so she was calling your bluff. Had the Officer had done it, she would've freaked out, though when he did, I don't think I saw it. My character is somewhat stubborn, sometimes. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mossino 0 Posted August 4, 2017 Good RPer and the character is well made. I'll give this a +Support Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Emptybag 12 Posted August 4, 2017 Okay, I think I'm going to start needing to set more of a precedent here. And I guess that's a good thing because moving forward we'll get less of this. 1) Okay make the app or don't man, blocking out the age is so inconsequential to anyone else and it's literally a reason you'd need to app. Just a note for next time 2) I don't want to give the OK for a child entering this early with a firearm unless their backstory really sells it, personally. 3) That being said, there is a total lack of backstory here. So it doesn't sell that firearm. I did see the additional background information, but it's riddled with plot holes and doesn't make much sense. Now, I'm willing to give over a +supportfor the child character, but I am not going to give the okay for everything involved in this app, due to what is listed above in addition to the extra admin information being lacking. If you want a character, with specific things, I'm looking for an actual malleable reason with some spine to support it. And currently (at least with what I was provided), I don't feel that the app deserves a full support. And as an added caveat, my support for the character itself is based solely because of the community support here. I feel like two children is plenty for now, but if others say you have the capacity to roleplay it well, I've no reason to not support it. Apologies if it sounds harsh, I really didn't mean it to be, just saying things as I think of them. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyNachos 0 Posted August 4, 2017 I've known Snyder for quite a while and I would be surprised if he couldn't accurately play a character like this. +support for what it's worth Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
postal_ech 0 Posted August 4, 2017 To be honest, reading the app then reading Empty's reply, I do find it strange for a kid to be given a gun when it's been three weeks since the apocalypse rolled through. I support the fact that, yeah, you can have a kid but I agree on what Empty here is saying. So far you have RPed on here a bit, so i am gonna give a +Support as well, but only for the kid, not with the gear she has. Unless you're able to write a lengthy and convincing backstory as to how she obtained and learned how to use within a three week period of the outbreak, then I MIGHT support the whole thing. For now I will support it despite not really knowing if the app qualifies for a guardian character or not. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Legion 5 Posted August 4, 2017 If I can't get access to the backstory to judge your character I can't legally support this. I don't understand the secrecy as your removing a large part of how the admin team judges either or not we support your application. For all I know your character could be a 8 story tall crustacean from the protozoic era. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
postal_ech 0 Posted August 4, 2017 If I can't get access to the backstory to judge your character I can't legally support this. I don't understand the secrecy as your removing a large part of how the admin team judges either or not we support your application. For all I know your character could be a 8 story tall crustacean from the protozoic era. [glow=red]Fucking crustaceans trying to sneak into my Zombie RP[/glow] Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Snyder 0 Posted August 4, 2017 I've been passing the backstory around through the admin team, hit me up on steam for it. I just don't want people seeing it because I can't write backstories for shit, (It's my worst writing skill) but I'm really good at doing actual RP itself. I'd rather the players judge me based on their experiences with me on server, then based on my backstory. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Legion 5 Posted August 5, 2017 Disqualified due to use of ESP. Moving to Denied. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites