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In an all serious note (And in the nicest way possible) your writing needs some work spring, large plot holes, bad grammar and untreated deus ex machina healed gut wounds its just bad all together. Some bullet points Jason is somehow able to pull out a fire axe which range from 28 to 36 inches long and throw it at a gunman who's at point blank range. Somehow is able to break a mans neck (Here's an extremely good article about how difficult it is to actually break someones neck) immediately after getting stabbed in the stomach, then seemingly recovering instantaneously from a rather severe wound? The color scheme Please Spring for the love of god STOP THIS. Formatting is a great alternative to differentiating things through color schemes. You fry potatoes, you grill people for information. Some things are overly specific, the reader doesn't need to know the make and model of the pistol your characters sustaining multiple blows with. You have a habit of writing extremely macho, overly detail specific, non-sensical stories. I'm not trying to bash your creativity but for things like this to be taken serious they need to be toned down from the 120% Micheal Bay Hollywood levels you write them at. I posted Doom: Repercussions of Evil because it is of the same caliber as this Udesky fan fiction. I hope to see your writing improve in the future. Thank you for reading through my criticism.
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Updated to fit new canon (Mostly)
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Questions Regarding Character Restorations (11/20/18)
Legion replied to Emptybag's topic in Character Bios
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Questions Regarding Character Restorations (11/20/18)
Legion replied to Emptybag's topic in Character Bios
The reasoning behind that is to have the group together, semi trusting and working torwards the same goal. You can totally act like you've been keeping together with your own group during those six months and know faces but not names yet. -
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Thank you for coming to my TED talk.
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YOU CANT EVEN SAVE AN IMAGE AS A CRICKE THEYRE ALL SQUARES. THE LEGION COMMUNITY FROWNS UPON THESE SHENANIGANS AND DEMANDS A REVERT TO THE GOOD OL’ DAYS WHEN IMAGES ONLY CAME IN SQUARE FORMAT. THE MEME TRAILS ARE TURNING THE SQUARES GAY. I DONT LIKE IT. SQUARE POWER
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The End Four years... Four years since the beginning of the end, in 2016. Suffering a Stage 4 Outbreak of M.A.V. (Mortem Animam Viventem coined by the World Health Organization during the initial stages of the outbreak) the world we once lived in has crumbled, nature has began taking back the once bustling cities and towns of the United States. The Doomsday clock has struck Midnight and mankind has been driven to the edge of extinction, nothing has been heard from any form of government in years. Any semblance of order has vanished leaving a lawless wasteland in its wake. Anarchy is true freedom, take what you need as you need what you take. Gimme Shelter Life as we know it has changed, who and what you were before the infection no longer matters, you are a survivor. May it be through fighting or hiding behind those that fight, somehow you've made it this far into the end. With the population count dwindling power in numbers is a rather popular concept. Those who survive have clumped together into camps across the United States, many with differing morale compasses. Trust is worth its weight in gold, Shamblers are predictable, but people? Not so much. Going Up The Country Our story takes us to the hills of Minnesota, December 2020. Where a year and a half ago our Generation One (Machogaming Continuation 2016-) survivors found their sanctuary promised to them. It was a decommissioned Nike Missile Bunker turned tourist trap that was left unfinished, with the missile silos and various other facilities flooding. Known to the Gen 1 survivors, it was utilized as a safe haven during the initial outbreak, and held as a defensible location for as long as it could, until the military died, fled, or left. The remnants of what was left was gruesome, and told the story of a valiant resistance of human vs. infected, although it appeared neither side lived to tell the tale. Having been left with cleanup duty, they have completed their journey and found a (once again) defensible position that had a surplus of food, medicine and ammunition. Unfortunately, time has taken its toll on these resources, and many things are now scarce once again. Six months ago (mid 2020) the Generation Two survivors (2017 Texas Survivors) stumbled upon the area themselves and after a small conflict joined the Gen 1 survivors. A body of government has been formed that splits duties into multiple sections based on individual skillsets including Security, Scavenging, Medicine, etc. It is our goal to replenish our inventory and protect our haven from Alive and Undead alike.
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Sending for help from the void (Black Screen) FIXED
Legion replied to MrSmiles's topic in Problems/Serverside
Addon Work Around Apparently with the new TF2 update it goofed up something in the files. This addon apparently fixes that. -
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Still looking. -Tanner
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I'm hesitant on this one, I have a feeling these characters will just be a roving PK squad. I would like to see Jordan on the server before giving him this equipment and character as I'm not to familiar with him. After further communication with Toki Im going to lean torwards support.
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Lil Skeeze (Hilltop Gang Blood) meeting his death by his own weapon. (Kansas City 2017, Colorized)
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MRW your bandit makes two survivors play russian roulette and one of the contestants points the gun at you and rolls the magic number.
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I think this is an interesting app that could go either way. You have my support.