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I'm relatively certain you can make a 1:1 recreation of this in PAC. Keep in mind we generally want to keep our content lower, as well as help people. All you'd need is a PMC body with a riot helmet and scarf w/ goggles. Whether you're cleared for all that gear or not idk, but my point here is that it's very easily made in PAC

I super thought this was serious too I-I mean, of course it's a serious issue, this chungus business. I dunno who would mess with that.

It was formerly played by me, but I have enough to juggle on my own without playing the group farmer

For the sake of my sanity please decide/indicate which Gen jacob this is, because that will reflect what characters of mine (or others) you add

Just commenting to mention that you & Ricky have the same song lol, dunno if it was planned, but it sure is interesting

awh poo dot gets a deaht spot but hannah doesnt get a living spot

Okay, firstly I want to say: this is a really good improvement over what I originally read. I can see the effort put into this app, and I appreciate what you've done to mold this into what it is. That being said, I am sharing the mindset of my fellow team. This isn't by far perfect, or a home-run. It's passable. But you've read that above me anyway. I haven't seen you RP much personally, but if they're vouching for you, then that's plenty good enough for me. Who knows, maybe if you keep with it your next app will be a home run I quoted this section because in your items it lists an MP5 and a plate carrier, however the plate carrier seems to have been stolen (despite it being shot anyway). I'm fine with the MP5 - with a different ammo of course, as ours is 9x19 - but I guess I'm confused on that vest bit. Either way, with so much support, now I feel comfortable accepting this application. Congrats!

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Okay so from what I gather this was a bit of a slip-up on our end; it states in our rules that foreigners and gear needs to be applied for, and I suppose nobody happened to notice. That being said, it's not a super huge deal so long as app is done well, and we can go from there. However, I don't feel comfortable giving out my support at the moment. I understand it was written simple and short (and probably swiftly) in order to patch things, but I do want to know more about the backstory of the character having come all the way from SK to the UK then to Minnesota. Her being a sole survivor to me before even making it across the water seems exceptionally unrealistic, although believable under certain conditions, which I don't think are met here (Does she know how to pilot a boat over open water, then? Did she have enough fuel for this? Knowledge of navigation and ports? Food?) There seems to be a plot hole in terms of getting from the UK to Minnesota. I also want to know what this 'protective vest' is made from & how was it obtained? Being a battle medic is...alright (we have an influx of military AND medics right now, but I'm willing to let that slide and see what you can do), I would probably just leave the torture knowledge at "I know how to do it because I'm medically trained," adding the part about this random mysterious women makes it sound worse. It's just a bunch of small things, for me, but it adds up. I'd say if it gets rewritten, fixing these points and revising the run-on sentences this will probably pass through easily

Where is this money doesnt help 4 years into the apocalypse nobody has money to pay also nobody greenlit this no Edit: Moved to garbage day

are you shadman do you draw good on your "sin-teach"

they can, but even if they do, loading 12+ HQ PACs will make me crash sometimes anyway

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Okay, it's really late for me (6am), but I'm gonna tackle this one quick: -needs work With some revisions, this could be an app I'd feel comfortable considering accepting, but as-is, it rambles very much and seems sporadic(?) I guess is the best way to describe it. That aside, we also have a few other prior military people who have app'd and many have shown support. This leads me personally to say that if it were to be revised, this app would get my vote to go to pending to be used at a later date as we still want the focus to be on civilian RP, not tons of people with prior service. For the story: I'm more interested in the mugging that took place that left this trained military man with no gear than I am with the reason why he left the militia he joined after the initial infection (although that's fine detail to keep). I'm also intrigued why a man with a 3.8 GPA out of high school (!!!) would opt to go into the service -- I'm sure people have done it before, but this man was clearly talented in multiple if not all areas of study to pull a 3.8. Keep in mind this is just my opinion, but I think most of the admin team will at least agree that the wording/framing needs some revisions.

mm, yeah, it's gonna be a 'no' from me, dawg

everyone looks so happy then there's bosco

+1 good entrance